Nice. I like it a lot. Only complaint I have is that the dark blue and purple drown out the words abit in the corner.

Also I think the girl should be presented in the bottom right. I just feel like that would lead me through better. but then again it's flippable

Epic coloring on the lady. The guy's anatomy needs a little work. I can tell you're expanding your coloring repertoire so I approve.

Overall awesome job. Those were the few things I could gripe about, lol and I'm an art student. Kudos.

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"We are a product of the decisions we make."
-Darian Antilles
~Obsidian Destiny~
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oooh wow that's impressive! i started trying to work out the song that appears upside down in this way...then i saw your comment. its a hard life....hehe

but that picture is really cool and induvidual and i like your writing! yay!

*pokes* mr. picky! (hehe)

<sub>Yeah. I went a touch too far on the inks. >.<

Hmmm..... I think I'll flip it then.

I HAVE been trying to expand my coloring. I've realized colors can only go so dark to create shadows, thus, complimentary colors come in handy. ^_^ And I've been working on male anatomy as well. I need a Life Drawing class, BADLY.

Thanks hun. ^_^ And gripe away, I need some more mature crits anywho.</sub>

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Although we may be surrounded by Darkness, and we even teeter on the edge of the Void, she's still special. She may not be the World's Light, but until there's no breath left in us, we're going to protect our light.

~Vadin and Animus

trust me you'll get tons when you get here. Can't wait to have you. ^_^

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"We are a product of the decisions we make."
-Darian Antilles
~Obsidian Destiny~
My avatar made by [link] from my art.

^_^ I'm just a friend helping his friend get kick@$$.

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"We are a product of the decisions we make."
-Darian Antilles
~Obsidian Destiny~
My avatar made by [link] from my art.

COOL

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I AM LARDO, QUEEN OF PROCRASTINATION!!!

love this song!!and this pic so so pertay

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and i cant tell if your laughing....between each smile theres a tear in your eye....theres a train leaving town in an hour....and its not waiting for you...and neither am i....

!~DRAWINGS ARE OUR MOOD RINGS~!

very impressive song... as well as the characters too

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